Rise and...Yikes.

Great characters and sound design. Really seemed like I was watching a cartoon. Well done!

Jonathan, this piece is so good! Makes me laugh in a wonderful way. Pleaseee do an audio comic strip. These characters are just too fun.

I absolutely LOVE this! It's soo funny and well done. You did a great job with doing the folley, the voices, and the overall story is SO fun! It truly puts a smile on my face every time I listen. The comedy is golden, and I can just picture the characters from your art coming to life. Also, that scream!! XDDDDD That was perfect. Well written, well acted, well done! I hope you do more!

This was such a clever idea! Great writing, fun characters, and terrific sound design. I admire the work on your foley sound effects. It's so neat that you took the initiative to record those on your own! I think this would make an entertaining series. I'd love to see more adventures with these two! Amazing job, my friend! You’ve got so much talent.

Is it bad to say I enjoy how traumatized Ralphie is?

Hilarious! I literally LOL'd (not just sayin' that!) multiple times! Very fun! Great job!