Mulvey Etude 1

I love how the three sections are very different yet still very connected. It's interesting how sound fade out to later fade back in. I think you made very great artistic choices

I thought it was interesting how the spray was used as a percussive element from 0.17 to 0.31. There are also very clear transitions between the three sections in this piece that demonstrate how the structure of the piece was planned out well. The build at 0.58 before the drop out is a great way of incorporating dynamics into the piece.

I really like how this song begins it interests me and then the way the next sounds are added in are very well timed to fit cohesively together. :53 I loved this part! This was a great segway into that build up at the end and it worked very well in your piece!