Romantic Flight Inspo (Dft 2)

Updated July 21st: a few hours of work (and after a long break from touching any of my compositions) - Tried improving some clonky voicings in the piano - Advanced the brass section substantially by replacing most voicings with new ones - added a few fun embellishments (percussion) - Added piccolo, clarinet 3, bass trombone, and percussion - Studied next to nothing; decided to compare voicings on actual keyboard to instrumental family and use ear to decipher what sounds best